Mrs. Garza!
he whisper-yells
hand raised,
tests await commands to start
You got a baby trash can?
Trash can? I moved it
to the front
hand sanitizer
box of tissues
bathroom sign-out sheet
He mumbles, looks around
making sure no one hears
or at least he tries
I walk to his desk
You got a baby trash can?
a little tiny trash can?
You see, I got sunflower seeds
eat em when I'm bored
I don't wanna
put em all over the table,
you know...
Yeah, I know,
spit
I get it
I eat them on long road trips
so I don't fall asleep
while I'm driving
Testing binder in hand
I walk to my office
looking over my shoulder
letting everyone know
I'm sort of watching
Yank, yank, yank, yank
Use paper towels
that's all I've got
take a bathroom break
if you need more
Psst...
Mrs. Garza
thank you
He sets his desk
as if breaking bread
computer plugged in-
he forgot to charge it
a bag of sunflower seeds
slouches agains the testing divider
paper towels stacked and ready
pencil
scratch paper
testing ticket
Today you'll be taking...
Crack!
He snaps the first seed
I enjoyed how you incorporated back and forth dialogue in your poem. Writing it in italics alludes to a conversation.
You also write a satisfying ending. Bravo!
I enjoyed how you incorporated back and forth dialogue in your poem. Writing it in italics alludes to a conversation.
You also write a satisfying ending. Bravo!
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Thank you!
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