Lately,
thoughts and
ideas have been
scattered
like wispy seeds
of a dandelion
flitting
around
trying to make
sense
of myself
on the deep breath
of a wish
Beautiful, succinct, and thought-provoking–I love the imagery of the dandelion, beautiful but bearing the potential to be a pesky weed at the same time…
The wish personified with breath and movement – – so magical, like that beginning of Forrest Gump when the feather floats down from the steeple on the wind.
Oooh, now you have me wondering about that deep wish. I can completely empathize with the scattered thoughts; having a hard time this school year with yet another wonky beginning.
So metaphorically beautiful and keeping with many of our current predicaments.
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Thank you, Susan.
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Beautiful, succinct, and thought-provoking–I love the imagery of the dandelion, beautiful but bearing the potential to be a pesky weed at the same time…
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Pesky as they are, there’s always a little magic in a dandelion.
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The wish personified with breath and movement – – so magical, like that beginning of Forrest Gump when the feather floats down from the steeple on the wind.
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Thank you, Kim.
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Oooh, now you have me wondering about that deep wish. I can completely empathize with the scattered thoughts; having a hard time this school year with yet another wonky beginning.
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