I’m Cooking!

Sunday morning
communing
with pen and notebook
three pages,
one is done

she bounds downstairs
only in the way
a teenage girl
can bound
bending down
loving on the puppy
resting at my feet

like a puppy
switches her brain switches
in an instant
"Okay, hear me out,
just hear me out"

I don't know what's
coming
a feral cat hiss with
a puff of fire breathing
dragon
flames?

she continues her
philosophical and
theological
conversation
asking questions
confirming views
questioning others

"I feel closer to God...
(or is it GOD or god?)
now that I've distanced
myself
I mean,
how can someone commit
to something so
important and
life changing when
they're so young?
this is a big thing,
more important than
college
or
marriage
and we have to make this kind
of decision
when we're
young?

She steps back,
surprised I didn't
jump in

"I'm cooking!
I'M COOKING!"

Yes, yes you are
keep at it, feisty one
keep at it
Sunday, March 10, 2024

6 thoughts on “I’m Cooking!

  1. Alice, the description of not knowing what’s coming from a feisty teen is priceless:

    a feral cat hiss with
    a puff of fire breathing
    dragon
    flames?

    Unfortunately, I recognize the truth of that! Which is why it works so beautifully. As does the sense of anticipation to the poem’s end. Wishing your both well with the ongoing philosophical, theological conversations and the commitment to…cooking!

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